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DOGS ARE ONE OF THE MOST POPULAR PETS IN THE WORLD, YET MANY WOULD SAY IT IS INAPPROPRIATE TO HAVE THEM IN BUILT UP INNER CITY AREAS. DO YOU AGREE OR DISAGREE

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I tend to confess that
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 of the most precious pet in the earth. In the present trending nature many people say it is inappropriate to have them in building up inner
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 areas. The following outline will explain the advantages and disadvantages with the dogs to have them in the inner
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 areas. Perhaps, the main reason the
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 of the most treatable animals in the world. And the few races in the
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 like puppies are more cute and very beautiful. If the
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 is there in the inner
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, people think, no
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 will not come inside the inner
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 and nothing will be theft from it because if they see the new person surrounding them will bark loudly. If they barked continuously, people will awake and will check what is happening on the street. On the other side,
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 of the friendly and helping animal in the world. People will play with that at the same time, same like a human's with dogs
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, will get the personal affection. Certainly, some dogs will provide the protection from the unusual incidents like from the wild animals attack on the humans. On the flip side, there are few races dogs which are very dangerous. There dogs will attack on the humans same like wild animals. If they see any new person, they will not think whether god or bad,
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 they will attack on the people. These kinds of dogs are very difficult to handle. Due to
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 reason many people don't prefer to have a puppy in the inner
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.
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, Most of the times,
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 race
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 do not like another race
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. If they see each other, they will start fighting. In my point of view, it is appropriate to have them in the build up inner
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. Many dogs are very friendly and having the helping nature. Many dogs have the faith of the people.
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