Some people believe that unpaid community service should be a compulsory part of high school programmes. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is said that high institute students should be required to participate in unpaid community activities as an indispensable part of their studying programmes. While I accept that it is beneficial for students, I
believe that we should not constrain them to do
activities at university. On the one hand, I would agree that
in addition
to the main subjects in the classroom, participating in volunteering brings a lot of benefits.
, community service as a way to help children reduce stress after stressful lessons Community service is a way to help children reduce stress after stressful lessons.
In other words
, children who take part in organised
work will meet different people to catch up with each other,
they can make new friends and generally feel better.
, helping those who from a poor background or disabled. It is important for children to learn how to love and share. Helping those who are from a poor background or disabled is important for children to learn how to love and share.
For example
, experiencing voluntary work for teaching poor students will be very likely to help students develop career in the future
On the other hand
, I
also thinks
also think
am also thinking
that high school should do the mandatory
work when they like and we should not force them.
, learning at school accounts for the majority time of the pupils.
In addition
, they
do homework every day.
, children need more leisure time to relax
of organising
service that may lead to students have to under greater pressure lead to greater pressure when they do not have enough time to complete their studies.
, students play sports
as tennis, swimming, soccer and so on. It is necessary for them to gain energy back to study more effectively after a hard day studying.
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