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There is an increasing trend around the world to have a small family rather than a large family. What are the advantages and disadvantages of having a small family rather than a large family?

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The decision of choosing short family over bigger one is on the rose globally. The benefit of small family is they have more freedom to choose their lifestyle and habits without depending on others.
On the other hand
, Wide-range family gives you more support in various ways. I will discuss underneath both
aspect
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aspects
. One of the main
advantage
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advantages
 of being minor family is that, they have the choices to adopt their way of life. Children and parents are both beneficiary
of
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Of
 shorter family in order to achieve sufficient financial resources. Kids can enjoy
full attention
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the full attention
 of their father, mother rather than sharing it with multiple siblings.
Additionally
, Parents can spend more time with the individual child
and
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And
 his
favorite
something regarded with special favor or liking
favourite
 activities
.
Accept space
.
Furthermore
, parents of minor family should be more relaxed and patient
.
Accept space
.
Lastly
, the family budget is more likely available for some extra purchases,
such
 as going to vacations or set up a separate bedroom for each child. On the flip side, an enormous family gives more moral support which short family can’t get at any cost.
Also
, a joint family
enhance
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enhances
 the relationship and bonding between each other. It is common that most of the younger’s in little family, especially in mega cities, even don’t know about their close relatives. For an instance, Kid in a vast family enjoys vacations and festival with other core members’ and gain much happiness, which a kid in nuclear family may not get. Those kids are grown without knowing the importance of relationship and family bonding. In conclusion, it is good to be in a small family as it will give the feel of freedom in every moment of life.
However
, a large family gives more moral support and cherishing memories.
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Topic Vocabulary:
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  • Living standards
  • Concentrated resources
  • Parent-child bonding
  • Upbringing
  • Environmental sustainability
  • Carbon footprint
  • Supportive network
  • Cooperation
  • Multigenerational
  • Cultural traditions
  • Agricultural communities
  • Loneliness
  • Social competencies
  • Financial strain
  • Resource dilution
  • Education opportunities
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