The company you work has decided to close the cafeteria, as the staff is not using it much. You are not happy with the decision. Write a letter to the director Give reason of low use How it will affect the staff Suggest ways to improve it

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Dear sir, I am writing to let you know that

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and another

employes

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employee

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received cafeteria closing notice yesterday. I know we are not using it much more. But no one is happy after getting

this

news. Let me explain

situation

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the situation

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, most of the staff members are ignoring

cafeteria

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the cafeteria

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because of the unproper cleaning. Even most of the chairs are already broken over there and some times

coffee

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the coffee

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machine is

also

not working. Due to

this

reason in break time we are going outside for coffee.

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cefeteria

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cafeteria

is our only place of

relaxtion

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relaxation

, where we can meet with

eachother

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each other

and reducing our stress. Would you kindly think about again on company's decision

please

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Because if company fixup seating

areegement

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arrangement

and focus on

cleaning

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of cafeteria

then

defectenely

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defectively

everyone will come in

this

area

regulary

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regularly

. Everyone like

this

area very much, because it is the place where coworkers can improve their strong bonding with

eachother

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each other

. Thank you for your consideration.

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Your

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faithfully, RUSHI

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