In the modern world, it is no longer necessary to use animals for food, clothing, or medicine. To what extent do you agree or disagree? disagree?

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There is no doubt that getting a
job
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is very difficult these days as there are many educated unemployed
job
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seekers are coming out for
job
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searching. When it is argued that a graduate degree is far more important that the previous employment history, opponent have a very different theory about
this
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. One the one hand, those who think that having a graduate degree is essential to get
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job pointout
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a job point out
job point out
job points out
the job point out
that
this
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shows that the candidate can advance through
ranks
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the ranks
.
In other words
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, securing a higher qualification, denotes that the person is equipped with a good amount of knowledge and skills to handle any possible challenge may encounter in his work place.
For example
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, possessing a specialized in medical education makes a doctor to show his excellency in that particular field
such
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as cardiac surgery, family medicine and so on. Alternatively, no one did become a specialist either
physician
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a physician
or
surgen
a physician who specializes in surgery
surgeon
with his experience, rather than holding a graduate certificate.
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, it is often
beleived
accept as true; take to be true
believed
that experienced candidates can have a better chance to be hired.
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, many recruiters usually prefer to select candidates with hands on an industrial
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history, especially, in
vactional
of or relating to a vocation or occupation; especially providing or undergoing training in special skills
vocational
jobs.
For instance
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, since there is a huge competition between candidates to kick start their career, having some prior work
expirence
the accumulation of knowledge or skill that results from direct participation in events or activities
experience
would make him employable. Despite
this
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, without a professional background, many staff often find to advance professionally later in their
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sector. In conclusion, people have different opinion on whether the qualification or the experience
make
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makes
a person employable. Even though a group of advocates
argue
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argues
that educational history plays a
significante
important in effect or meaning
significant
role, others oppose
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and say that experience is counted.
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