Some people believe that all wild animals should be protected. Others say that few wild animals should be protected instead. Discuss both views and give your opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Animal annihilation is an alarming issue the world over.

While

some support the idea that all the

animals

in the wild have the right to live, others believe that species close to extinction are the ones who need protection. In

this

essay, I will discuss both

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views,

while

strongly supporting the view that entire wildlife needs preservation.

Firstly

, over centuries human activity like industrialisation and deforestation has accelerated

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populace to decrease.

While

earlier, there was no awareness which caused various living beasts to disappear from the planet, now governments have been alarmed and allocated funds for animal conservation.

Furthermore

,

animals

that are close to

extinctions

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are carefully nurtured in

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zoos and big budgets are spent on their upkeep and breeding. A good example of

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is how China made efforts to conserve the giant panda populace and got them off the extinction list.

However

, we cannot let the other

animals

die just because it's impossible to keep each one of them under watch.

Moreover

, since each and every

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is equally important to maintain the balance of the ecosystem they need protection.

This

can be achieved

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care of their natural habitat. Governments around the world need to make strict laws against deforestation, which in turn protect all the wild creatures without much effort.

For example

, in India,

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Conservation Act was the biggest movement which saved the tigers in the wild and took them off the extinction list. To summarise, I would like to reiterate that

while

something that protecting just a certain number of

animals

is enough I do not agree with the statement.

In addition

, I would like to add that rather equal effort

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to be put

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,

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saving the entire animal kingdom.