Many people find it hard to balance their work with other parts of their lives. What are the reasons for this? How can this problem be overcome?

With excessive workload in the 21st century, it is clear that many people now struggle to achieve a successful work-

life

balance.

This

essay will explore two reasons which cause

this

phenomenon and propose measures that might address them. One concern with regards to our workplace is a stable job is not guaranteed.

This

is because employers have the option of replacing poorly

performed employees

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performed, employees

, which means that any existing workers can be replaced by qualified fresh and post graduates.

Consequently

, employees force themselves to allocate more

time

at the workplace and less

time

for their personal

life

.

However

, in many cases, many people would have inefficient

time

usage in the workplace to surf social media and play online games. In order to tackle

this

issue, one should be able to focus on their tasks for a fixed amount of

time

, and they should not take additional responsibility when their work

time

is out. Another reason why people are working more is that they want to satisfy material values.

This

is because stressful city

life

leads to people finding happiness, and that would mean

profit

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a profit

to advertisers: appealing advertisements encourage people to buy products for convenient use, because they can bring short-term happiness to their users. The result is detrimental: many workers are out of monthly money at the end, and

this

reminds them to be a moneymaker at work.

Nevertheless

, people can avoid these purchases by focusing on inexpensive hobbies,

such

as reading books and collecting stamps. These hobbies not only cost less money than buying products that

brings

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bring

people

satisfaction but

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satisfaction, but

also

increase the attention for their individual

life

. In conclusion, I believe that job stability and materialism are the two major reasons why keeping a balance between work and

life

has become difficult, but

this

can be solved in order by relocating one’s attention and focus on enjoyable hobbies.