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in many countries doday,crime novels and tv crime dramas are becoming more and more popular why do you think that these books and tv shows are popular? what is your opinopn of crime fiction and TV crime dramas?

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Nowadays, thanks to the advanced technologies, the choices of distraction are more and more available than any time before, among all
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 entertainments many people have displayed a high interest performance for the genre of evil books and TV
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 series, in
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 trend and why i think that i can negatively impact our society.
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, the popularity of
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 based books and shows can be explained by the human nature of viewers mixed between excitement and curiosity, they like solve the mystery and the puzzles from the violation based content. Generally the strolling
crime
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 based content -to be text, audio, and visual is quite thrilling to
make
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crime
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 fiction provides an adrenaline rush which
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Moreover mostly
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Moreover, mostly
crime
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 based series and novels are inspired
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by
 true events
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 making people aware about the different types of
crime
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, when we are aware of the tips that a criminal adopt we have
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a better chance
 to defend ourselves
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 situation.
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, the knowledge about the world of evil, transmitted by these sources, can be life-saving,
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 an exciting entertainment which
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is largely contributed
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 the increased popularity of these types of novels and dramas.
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, people are getting in the same time entertaining and helpful wisdom,
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 trend has some disadvantages too. While, by making individuals aware of the possible dangers and prepare them to protect themselves, at the same moment it
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inspires
 new and better ideas to the lawbreakers.
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 criminals have confessed after their detention have inspired by a book or a movie. Adding to
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, negative values conveyed by acts of violence and monstrous characters depicted in
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 which can have an irreversible impact on the
behavior
manner of acting or controlling yourself
behaviour
 and the development, especially in the younger generation. For an illustration, a novel on cannibalism can be extremely disturbing. To conclude, the excessive popularity among
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the people
 of the
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 fiction is explained by the extreme thrilling and the useful knowledge provided. In my opinion, even there are advantages, the side effects are too grave to be ignored.
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, some moderation in their use is indispensable.
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