Many scientists believe that now we can study the behavior of a three-years-old child to see whether they will grow up to be criminals.To what extend do you think crime is determined by human nature?Is it possible to stop children from going up to be criminals?

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Some researchers are of the opinion that

heredictary

occurring among members of a family usually by heredity

hereditary

characteristics are the main factors resulting in crime commitment of children.From my point of view

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inherent

nature

has some impacts but it is nurture that plays a pivotal role in children’s development. On the one hand

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I agree

thhat

pointing out something

that

that's

innate characteristics have several influences on the process of moulding a

child

.In fact

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everyone inherits some certain characteristics from parents.Some children are born to be quiet

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while some others are more active.If children

likes

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engaging in violent games

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or has bad habits

such

as bullying others from

the young

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the youngest

age

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it means that they have

tedency

an attitude of mind especially one that favors one alternative over others

tendency

of violence which is the motive for them to commit crime when growing up.

On the other hand

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I believe external factors related to upbringing and education are far more significant.A

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person’s

personality and behaviour are the result of the interaction between

nature

and nurture

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so it is

definitely

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defined

to mould a

child

into any direction by proper bringing-up.

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child

can receive proper training

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particularly learning to distinguish right from wrong

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they are less likely to go astray in their adolescence and adulthood.Even if a

child

is born to criminal

parents but

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parents, but

brought away from that environment and provided quality education

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he will not be a criminal.

Thus

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interplay

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the interplay

between

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heredity

hereditary

and environmental factors must be there. In conclusion

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my view is that both

nature

and nurture play a part in determining the character of a person and both are inextricably linked with each other.But nurture outweighs

nature

and it is

definetely

without question and beyond doubt

definitely

possible to prevent children from becoming criminals.

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