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Some education systems make students focus on certain subjects at the age of 15, while others require students to study a wide range of subjects until they leave school. What are the benefits of each system? Which is better?

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Many students are made to attend certain classes when they are 15 years of age, while others are required to learn various subjects before leaving school.
Although
 an education system with a broad range of subjects can provide diverse
knowledge
, that with a narrower range is better as learners have more
time
 for other activities desired. Those supporting the former education system may claim that students can access a wider range of
knowledge
 that they may need in their later life. Having a chance to attend many classes, students are taught numerous lessons related to various fields, many of which can be of great help when they grow up.
For instance
, in Vietnam, students aiming at engineering courses in
university
Suggestion
the university
 are only required to have good grades in Maths and Physics.
However
, the
knowledge
 they have acquired in non-major classes like English or Computer Science can offer them a competitive edge when they apply for a job in a multinational company, compared to those who are not familiar with foreign languages or computers.
On the other hand
, students who
study
 only a few subjects have more
time
 for other purposes than those studying so
many
Suggestion
much
. With fewer subjects to learn, they have extra
time
 either for stress relievers
such
 as playing some sport or taking a rest or for
further
 research related to their chosen subjects. The former activity helps students relieve pressure at school and recharge their energy, whereas the latter is a good way of reviewing the lesson taught in class. Scientifically, these activities increase their
study
 efficiency and academic performance, so
such
 an education system is much better than that forcing students to learn various subjects. In conclusion,
although
 the
knowledge
 learnt in various classes is potentially helpful, I believe that a
study
 program with not so many classes is more beneficial to students who can have more
time
 for deeper
study
 or relaxation.
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