Many people think that important things in life are mostly free or can’t be bought. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?

There are several

things

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that a human being

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deeply desires

for

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in his/her life, and these

things

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are of great value. Most individuals believe that these valuable

things

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such

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, such

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as love, success, friendship, or

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family

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family,

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can not be purchased

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however

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, agree with

this

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opinion

but

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there is some price to be paid. In

this

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essay, we shall elaborate

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this

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view

further

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, feelings like love or success are not readily available anywhere. It is the emotions which a person receives irrespective of the time, place or condition

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such

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love from a mother to her child.

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, people work hard to procure some of these emotions; to illustrate, success is not procured overnight

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profession has to start from scratch and with years of experience, knowledge, and

skills

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skills,

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makes

him

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her

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taste prosperity.

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, these feelings have different resources and every now and

then

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it reaches out to the person deserving;

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, from parents, siblings, friends, and spouses have no restrictions.

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, even though there are plenty of ways an individual acquires

such

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things

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, there is a price to pay not in the form of money, but with the same feelings in return,

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, a trust between spouse, friends and family is mostly returned with

similar

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amount of loyalty.

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, it is destiny that determines the quantity and quality of

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occurring in a person’s life. To

summarize

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, there are two sides to a coin;

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, the stuff

that is

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important to us can not have a price tag

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only can

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be measured by mutual feeling

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structure

Plan one idea per paragraph and make the intro and conclusion clear.

grammar

Use short, simple sentences and avoid long links.

content

Give a clear example for each idea to back up your point.

mechanics

Check spelling and punctuation, use not and n't properly.

idea

You state a clear view and try to support it.

organization

You use examples to back up your point.

content

There is effort to connect love and success to life value.

Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

In conclusion
To conclude
To summarize
Finally
In a nutshell
In general

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

261 words

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family
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health
happiness
memory
trust
care
kindness
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security
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effort
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