One of the consequences of improved medical care is that people are living longer and life expectancy is increasing. Do you think the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

Over the past century, the advent of technological advancements in the medical field has not only

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to many incipient scientific revelations but is

also

mystically enchanted with comprehensive medical care,

thus

leading to the increased lifespan of

people

. From my perspective, it is an enlightening result of our human civilization

while

taking precedence over the disadvantages. The merits of longer

life

expectancy can be discerned from both individuals and society

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whole. For families and individuals,

longevity

is considered a fortune to support their family and drive their passion. With parents living longer, children can have more time to stay with and show filial respect. So

longevity

avails to promote the harmonious relationship among family members.

Besides

, thanks to rejuvenation biotechnology progressions, regardless of your chronological age, multiple chronic health conditions, including diabetes, cardiovascular diseases, Alzheimer's even cancer can be forestalled. All these may play a role in determining your happiness during

life

and perseverance to go beyond the limits

while

cultivating relationships.

On the other hand

, as for sociological aspects,

longevity

allows

people

to contribute more to humanity with their aptitude and sagacity. Numerous prominent scientists

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philosophers and other elites died with regret that they could not accomplish their goals.

For example

, Stephen Hawking, a prominent physicist who was diagnosed with ALS, had been confined to a wheelchair

while

making breakthroughs in the astronomical realm for years. With the evolution of medical studies, he should be able to discover more and raise

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around the globe to unravel the unknown.

Hence

, since

people

are enjoying a longer

life

now and are endowed with various skills, they can accumulate their talents and use their time efficiently to plan and construct their aspirations.

On the contrary

, the

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problem is a salient issue during times

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when calculating the concurrent level of annual household expenditure, it is known that financial burden will affect the affordability of living in households

while

leading to more pensioners below the poverty line. (

Therefore

, it is

also

the responsibility of the government to aid them with medical care services if their children cannot afford…) *Should I talk about how the cons can be solved? Alternatively, longer

life

expectancy and lower fertility

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may engender the lack of young working forces.

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, the world with

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young

people

will become less vigorous. The increasing population is challenging the tolerance of the planet when most of the resources

people

are consuming are non-renewable.

However

, if the world can form alliances resulting in excellent concordance between governments and citizens, these problems can be dealt with. In conclusion, after discussing both

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and cons of increasing growth expectancy, the benefits do outweigh the disadvantages through different aspects.The advantages both

people

and the world can get from the phenomenon of

people

living longer are irreplaceable and indispensable. It is the truth that

longevity

is a symbol of civilization and

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quality of

life

.