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Many people believe that having a fixed punishment for all crimes is more efficient. What are the advantages and disadvantages of having a fixed punishment.

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It is often believed that retribution for any offence must be fixed and could not be changed on any basis. There may be a few pros and cons of
this
 statement, because sometimes the situation and people can be changed with the time. So based on that we will discuss both consequences in the below paragraphs.
To begin
 with, For some crimes fixed
punishment
 can have an advantage for law. There are scenarios in which retribution criteria change while reaching the conclusion of the case.
For example
, as there is a death sentence for the rape case in most of the countries. But after the number of hearings and plea the it took
number
Suggestion
a number
 of turns.
Hence
 at the end of the hearing few people get the same
punishment
 and other get the life sentence. So by
this
 few criminals may escape from
their
objective case of they
them
.
Accept space
.
 Sometimes few gets bail after a few years. With
this
 criminals supposed to execute more crimes in the future. In
this
, the fixed
punishment
 is an advantage and can decrease the offence in the country. On the other side, there are few criteria in which rigid
punishment
 can be a disadvantage for a few people. Because there are many, who unintentionally get trapped in the offence.
For instance
, in someone murder, there can be a number of executives, but in the initial stage one cannot get an idea of exact criminal. So with the fixed retribution, the life of person family can ruin. So it may have a disadvantage at that time. To conclude, every side has both consequences, so one should take a decision after seeing each and every aspect of
case
Suggestion
the case
a case
. So fixed
punishment
 can be risky for the law of the country.
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