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In some countries, an increasing number of people are suffering from health problems as a result of eating too much fast food. It is, therefore, necessary for governments to impose a higher tax on this kind of food. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

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In
this
 contemporary era, due to increasing in restaurants and ready made
food
 outlet, people are craving for
such
 outside
food
. In some nations, a soaring huge number of masses were suffering from fitness related disease, due to a consuming a too much outside
food
. Some members of the community think that, an administration should charge a heavy tax on
such
 sorts of foods. I totally disagree with
this
 notion. As
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
 think that, it is an individual own responsibility to take
care
 of himself.
To begin
 with, to be honest, people in todays world are becoming more and more
care
 less about their health and diet.
Hence
, they eat whatever they feel tasty.
Therefore
, they easily get rid of a lot of disease
such
 as obesity and heart attack.
Moreover
, a soaring large number of fast
food
 outlet makes human even more easy to get out and eat anything readily available in the restaurant.
As a result
, they rapidly get sick.
For instance
, a young generation in todays society is more preferring to hang out with their friends and eat unhealthy
food
instead
 of homemade
food
, which is actually a more hygiene.
On the other hand
, some people think that authority should rate a charge on
such
 foods.
This
 will not make a sense, as it will never stop a consumption of
this
 unhealthy
items
Suggestion
item
. Because, those who are fascinated about
such
 cuisine would be bought at any cost.
Although
, those people are taste concern rather than cost concern. Apart from
this
, it is personal responsibility to take
care
 of himself with getting away from junk
food
 and through taking a lean
food
. To conclude
this
, There is a plethora of reason that putting a tax on junk
food
 is not a rational for
this
 issue.
However
, people can reduce
such
 disease by staying away from junk
food
 and taking
care
 of their self themselves.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • public health
  • obesity
  • diabetes
  • heart disease
  • health outcomes
  • healthcare costs
  • consumer behavior
  • socio-economic backgrounds
  • ethical implications
  • public health campaigns
  • subsidies
  • regulations
  • nutritional content
  • healthier food options
  • government intervention
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