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English is becoming the most prominent language in the world. Do the advantages of having only one language in the world outweigh the disadvantages?

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It is a fact that English is in an outstanding position in the
world
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 as it is used globally nowadays.
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 has caused people to think about whether it is beneficial to have an exclusive
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 worldwide. Having
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language
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 would introduce both pros and cons, but I think that the drawbacks do outweigh the benefits. On the
one
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 hand, it is clear that to communicate in
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 global
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 would bring about several advantages.
One
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 evident strength is that it would reduce the
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 barrier by strengthening greater understanding between countries.
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, the flow of information is no longer deterred, thereby promoting learning and mediating conflicts. Another reason is that it would help to develop a healthier
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 economy by enhancing trade facilitation.
Last
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 but not least, cultural and religious discrimination can be reduced to some
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extent, if
 all people in the
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 communicate in the same
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.
On the other hand
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, I argue that there are some obvious disadvantages that would make it better not to have a sole
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 in the
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, globalisation in
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 terms will undermine cultural diversity. It means that the special features regarding ways of life and
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 of each culture would all be lost if there were only
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language
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.
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, having
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 global
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 will definitely turn
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 into a monotonous place without any uniqueness of different areas.
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, people would not be interested in discovering the
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.
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,
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 will
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 be a
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disadvantage
 point for individuals with high linguistic intelligence since there are no other languages for them to challenge their brain. In conclusion, there are plus points to speak
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language
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 globally.
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, it seems to me that its advantages would be more important regarding the loss of cultural diversity, the lack of motivation to explore the
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, and a minus point for
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 intelligence
Submitted by Vo Truong Thinh on

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