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Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

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Human kind has been experiencing different events in each generation.
Hence
, it is a bit hard to understand between each generation.
Moreover
, it is undeniable that interaction between the
age
 gap or cultural difference can be hard to understand without a helping material. From my perspective, I believe that the power of
music
 can be the material to bring the different ages and culture together.
This
 essay will elaborate reasons and conclude with personal opinion.
Firstly
,
music
Suggestion
the music
 cannot be outdated in any generation. A lot of musicians have been emerged and disappeared repeatedly. But the most outstanding musician,
such
 as Steve wonder, Michel Jackson, has never been hidden in shadow, even an enormous contemporary musician popped up.
For instance
, it is a personal experience that can support
this
 thesis. Upon being an international student in Canada, I was an unsophisticated speaker of English.
However
, I could interact with others singing that famous
music
, even they had a different background and ages.
Hence
, even we were born in different countries,
music
 can overcome the difficult language and cultural situation.
Secondly
, soul is a universal language to unite people regardless of cultural background. People can understand the concept of melody, which can easily amuse them.
For instance
, the most famous tune of all "We are the
world
" produced by a famous musician.
This
 song promotes love and peace around the
world
, and
this
 song translated into the various language versions; people from disparate cultural backgrounds enjoy and understand its underlying messages.
Thus
,
music
 is a powerful resource to shrink the
age
 discrepancy all over the
world
.
However
,
music
 can exaggerate the gap of
age
 difference, a different stage of maturity has altered the taste of melody. Since the tune is one of the art forms to reflect the social situation or reality, people in the dissimilar stage of humanity are inclined to listen to the specific piece that indicates the situation and matches their maturity. In conclusion, melody can influence the
world
.
Although
 it large the
age
 disparity, it helps to connect people from multitudes cultures.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • universal language
  • evoke
  • connect
  • diverse audiences
  • cultural exchange
  • generational gaps
  • shared experiences
  • unifying force
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