The animal species are becoming extinct due to human activities on land and in sea. What are the reasons and solutions

It is a public concern that

wildlife

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on the verge of

extinction

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because of

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mankind's

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impact on Earth. While

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issue is

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constituting a disadvantage

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to some extent. I completely side with it. There are several

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reasons

why animal species more face the risk of

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than ever before. The

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reason, it is the development of industrial sectors that exerts a negative influence on the environment and pose a threat

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the existence of

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. Specifically, manufactories

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generate

the significant amount of industrial emissions

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as greenhouse gas, which is the culprit of global warming and ozone depletion.

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in the long run would cause wildfires that destroy the habitat of

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, pushing them toward the verge of the

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. The government should be mainly

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responsible

for proposing solutions to

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environmental

problems. Policy maker should impose strict laws regarding elimination

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industrial emissions. To be more specific, companies that have a tendency to release an excess amount of industrial emissions would face pecuniary penalties. With the state’s action,

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issue is addressed.

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, the reason for rising the

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disappearance of animal species is illegal hunting. It is

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erroneously

believed that the parts of their body would cure the wide rage of serious illness. In fact, we can see many videos or pictures about rhinos losing their horns, wild elephants losing their tusks or leopards being killed for fur. There are various measures that could be implemented to tackle

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this problem

these problems

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, stricter punishment should be imposed for unlawful hunting to make sure that endanger animal are properly

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protected

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, it is necessary for the government to promote public

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would be trackles In conclusion, there are various factor leading to the potentially

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of

wildlife

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and steps need to be taken to address

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serious issue