The animal species are becoming extinct due to human activities on land and in sea. What are the reasons and solutions

There are several reasons why animal species more face the risk of extinction than ever before. The

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reason, it is the development of industrial sectors that exerts a negative influence on the environment and pose a threat to the existence of wildlife. Specifically, manufactories generate the significant amount of industrial emissions

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as greenhouse gas, which is the culprit of global warming and ozone depletion.

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in the long run would cause wildfires that destroy the habitat of wildlife, pushing them toward the verge of the extinction. The government should be mainly responsible for proposing solutions to environmental problems. Policy maker should impose strict laws regarding elimination of industrial emissions. To be more specific, companies that have a tendency to release an excess amount of industrial emissions would face pecuniary penalties. With the state’s action,

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, the reason for rising the potential disappearance of animal species is illegal hunting. It is erroneously believed that the parts of their body would cure the wide rage of serious illness. In fact, we can see many videos or pictures about rhinos losing their horns, wild elephants losing their tusks or leopards being killed for fur. There are various measures that could be implemented to tackle

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, stricter punishment should be imposed for unlawful hunting to make sure that endanger animal are properly protected.

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, it is necessary for the government to promote public

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