Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plant and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion

The world is dealing with several environmental issues, these include the
extintion
a mutually agreed delay in the date set for the completion of a job or payment of a debt
extension
extinction
of specific kinds of plants and animals.
However
, there are some people who believe that we should be more concerned about other environmental issues. To me, it is important to preserve the animal kingdom and the whole ecosystem. 
To begin
with, there are other serious problems that threat the human race.
First
, the unstoppable growth of the industry and the production of energy. Many companies are producing waste material and using unrenewable resources to operate, which is extremely harmful for the planet.
That is
the case of the
agriculture
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agricultural
field, where countless
liters
a metric unit of capacity, formerly defined as the volume of one kilogram of pure water under standard conditions; now equal to 1,000 cubic centimeters (or approximately 1.75 pints)
litres
of fresh water are used to clean the abattoirs and the
left overs
food remaining from a previous meal
leftovers
are
threw
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thrown
in the rivers. When it comes to energy production, a lot of damage to the planet is involved. It is a precursor of global warming and acid rains due to the steam liberated in the process.
Moreover
, some types of energy required to digg and fracture the soil to find fossils, a practice
that is
not
environmental
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environmentally
friendly. There is no doubt that these
problem
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problems
are
also
severe for the
enviroment
the totality of surrounding conditions
environment
.
However
, the impact on particular
species
of plants and animals might be even worse. While the previous environmental problems might have some solutions and alternatives, the
extintion
no longer active; extinguished
extinction
of animal and plants is irreversible. Today, many
species
of animals have been lost because of the climate changes and the luxury clothes industry.
For example
, the polar bears are
in
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at
great risk because of climate change. If they
dissapear
get lost, as without warning or explanation
disappear
disappeared
, future generations might not have the opportunity to know
this
amazing specie. I believe that as human
beings we
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beings, we
are affecting and attacking animals and plants.
For example
, people are buying bags and
accesories
clothing that is worn or carried, but not part of your main clothing
accessories
made
by
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of
from
crocodrile
large voracious aquatic reptile having a long snout with massive jaws and sharp teeth and a body covered with bony plates; of sluggish tropical waters
crocodile
skin which
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skin, which
put
in
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at
risk
this
specie.
Lastly
, we are
deforestating
the state of being clear of trees
deforestation
lands and bushes just to find resources or to build
newroad
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new road
and houses, which promote the loss trees and
plants
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plant
species
. In conclusion,
although
both views are completely harmful for the planet, I completely support the animals and
plants
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plant
preservation because they a big part in our world. It is important to preserve its
species
for the future.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Biodiversity
  • Ecosystems
  • Extinction
  • Climate change
  • Global warming
  • Habitat loss
  • Greenhouse gases
  • Pollutants
  • Sustainability
  • Carbon footprint
  • Renewable resources
  • Conservation
  • Deforestation
  • Endangered species
  • Ecological balance
  • Overpopulation
  • Biodegradable
  • Recycling
  • Environmental stewardship
  • Eco-friendly
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