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At present more and more people consider that animals should not be used for the benefit of human beings. These people, however, note that animals could be used if there is no evidence that they suffer in any way.

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This
 point of view has strong and wears sides.
On the other hand
 people used to utilize animals for food, clothes, sports etc., and we can say that there is no real substitution for meat and milk,
for example
. Could we say that animals do not suffer when they are killed? If we say that we don’t want animals to suffer in any way we should reject eating beef and become and chickens.
In
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On
 the other
hand we
Accept comma addition
hand, we
 can give up using animals for clothes and sports. We could stop wearing furs, we could
also
 stop races as we don’t really know whether horses enjoy them.
To
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Two
 final the right way we should decide what are the frames of the statement “no suffer in using animals for human’s purposes”. We should
also
 decide what kinds of using of animals we can refuse without damaging the
human’s
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human
 health/ we should
also
 create rules of painless use of animals or try to make
this
 pain as small as we can. In my opinion, we should stop using animals for pleasure and joy if it has
a
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an
 influence badly on them. We must use animals only for our real needs. We should
also
 do our best to prevent animals from suffering starvation and useless killing.
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