As countries develop, more and more people buy and use their own cars. Do the advantages of this trend for individuals outweigh the disadvantages for the environment?

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of the population growth crisis, the ownership and driving of

transport

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have increased with the progress of nations.

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trend would introduce both pros and cons, but I believe that the drawbacks do outweigh the benefits. On the one hand, it is clear that

owing

have ownership or possession of

owning

a vehicle would bring about several advantages. One evident strength is that it would offer personal comfort to the owners.

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, they do not need to wait at the station any moment for getting into a public

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, thereby saving that time and utilizing it in productive ways. Another reason is that it would help them to avoid the climate difficulties,

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as excessive heat or heavy rain, and easily reach their destination.

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but not least, it would be more convenient to

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goods in car rather than using public

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which is not secure and is short of storage space.

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, I argue that there are some obvious disadvantages would arise.

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, excessive numbers of car will severely contaminate the atmosphere.

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is because the growth of vehicles

emit

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emits

more fumes, like carbon dioxide and nitrogen, which are perilous and harmful for the atmosphere.

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, having more cars will pollute the air.

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, the polluted ambiance promotes respiratory diseases and decreases the ideal standard of living.

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the high

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the highest

levels of car users on the road, especially during rush hour can lead to lots of congestion, traffic jams and a lack of parking spaces. In conclusion, there are plus points to have a privately-owned vehicle.

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, it seems to me that its disadvantages would be more significant regarding the contaminated atmosphere, the polluted air and the congestion.

Vo Truong Thinh

Aug 29, 2020

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

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personal mobility
convenience
commuting
quality of life
personalized space
carbon emissions
global warming
air pollution
traffic congestion
environmental degradation
resource depletion
electric vehicles
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