some people claim that not enough of the waste from homes is recycled. They say that the only way to increase recycling is for governments to make it as legal requirement. To what extent do you think laws are needed to make people recycle more of their waste?

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Nowadays, environment pollution is more serious day by day. Some people think that governments should make the legal requirement to increase the

waste

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from home is recycled. I agree with

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notion. In

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essay, I will discuss the reason why there are not enough recycled

waste

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and laws are needed to make people recycle more their

waste

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. For some people, it is a complex process to make the right recycling. In some countries, there are different process with varied

waste

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, they need to remove the ingredient label on the product before they throw it

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the recycle bin or they must collapse some shape of

box

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the box

such

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milk box or beverage which is in box shape.

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may make them feel

ennoying

causing irritation or annoyance

annoying

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, they must need more place to separate

varied

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variables

varieties

variances

rubbish

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and throw it away in the recycling schedule.

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, people need different trash bin to

separate varied

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separate, varied

categories of

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and follow the recycle schedule to throw it out.

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also make

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also makes

people not willing to obey these

rule

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rules

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, the

goveronment

the organization that is the governing authority of a political unit

government

should set up the legal requirement to ensure citizens obey the laws.

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means they have a

responbility

the social force that binds you to the courses of action demanded by that force

responsibility

to maintain their

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in the right way and develop their habit

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recycling. The best example is, if

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the organization that is the governing authority of a political unit

governments

make it legally,

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make

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makes

people must concern about the process of their

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, they will get used to do it and develop a habit

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recycle

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recycling

their trash. In conclusion,

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some people feel

annoy

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annoyed

to recycling.

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, I strongly

belive

accept as true; take to be true

believe

that government should make the laws on

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recycled

recycling

trash, because

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will force people to

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be obedient to

obey

this

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rule and make them get used to recycle their

rubbish

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

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Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

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290 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

Waste management
Recycling
Sustainability
Mandatory
Voluntary
Legislative measures
Environmental impact
Public awareness
Regulation
Sanctions
Compliance
Recycling facilities
Consumer behavior
Waste reduction
Resource conservation
Circular economy
Eco-friendly
Biodegradable
Landfill
Global initiative

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some people claim that not enough of the waste from homes is recycled. They say that the only way to increase recycling is for governments to make it as legal requirement. To what extent do you think laws are needed to make people recycle more of their waste?

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Rich countries should allow jobs for skilled and knowledgeable employers who are from poor countries. Do you agree or disagree.

Scientists have been warning for many years about protecting the environment and that people must limit the use of energy in their daily lives. Despite warnings, many people do not do so. What are the reasons for this and how can people be encouraged to protect the environment?

The picture below shows the difference in the layout of the conference centre in 2010 and 2025.

Some people think that to learn about other countries, they need to travel. Some say that it is not necessary to travel; we can have information through TV and the Internet. Discuss both views and give your opinion.