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Some expert believe that it is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary school rather than secondary. Do the advantage of this outweigh the disadvantage

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The dispute between professionals about which is the perfect
time
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 for learning a foreign
language
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 has been there for years. Some experts believe that the primary
school
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 should be the
time
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 of adding new
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 to the children's knowledge. While others argue that secondary
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 is the right
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. In
this
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 essay we will discuss the pros and cons of learning a foreign
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 at primary
school
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. In terms of advantages, the skills that children learn in the primary will be a lifetime skill.
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, learning a new
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 in
this
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 age will be extremely hard, but at the same
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 will be stuck in their minds for a long
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.
For instance
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, my nephew after the
second
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 grade transferred to an international
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 that teach the English very well.
As a result
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, until now he speaks Arabic and English perfectly.
Moreover
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, learning a foreign
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 will give the
child
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 wide range of opportunities in the future.
On the other hand
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, there are some disadvantages of learning the children a foreign
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 at primary
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.
First
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 of all, it will take plenty of
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 and work for the
child
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. So, it is not logic to spend a lot of
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 in something we are not sure that the
child
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 love.
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, the high skilled teachers always teach secondary and high
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. So learning a foreign
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 in a wrong way will make the
language
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 difficult forever. In conclusion, the children in the primary
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 do not have a lot of hope to distribute the learning of a new
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. As well as, if the
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 choose the right
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language it
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language, it
 will benefit the
child
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 too much.
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