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Some expert believe that it is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary school rather than secondary. Do the advantage of this outweigh the disadvantage

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The dispute between professionals about which is the perfect
time
 for learning a foreign
language
 has been there for years. Some experts believe that the primary
school
 should be the
time
 of adding new
language
 to the children's knowledge. While others argue that secondary
school
 is the right
time
. In
this
 essay we will discuss the pros and cons of learning a foreign
language
 at primary
school
. In terms of advantages, the skills that children learn in the primary will be a lifetime skill.
However
, learning a new
language
 in
this
 age will be extremely hard, but at the same
time
 will be stuck in their minds for a long
time
.
For instance
, my nephew after the
second
 grade transferred to an international
school
 that teach the English very well.
As a result
, until now he speaks Arabic and English perfectly.
Moreover
, learning a foreign
language
 will give the
child
 wide range of opportunities in the future.
On the other hand
, there are some disadvantages of learning the children a foreign
language
 at primary
school
.
First
 of all, it will take plenty of
time
 and work for the
child
. So, it is not logic to spend a lot of
time
 in something we are not sure that the
child
 love.
Secondly
, the high skilled teachers always teach secondary and high
school
. So learning a foreign
language
 in a wrong way will make the
language
 difficult forever. In conclusion, the children in the primary
school
 do not have a lot of hope to distribute the learning of a new
language
. As well as, if the
school
 choose the right
language it
Accept comma addition
language, it
 will benefit the
child
 too much.
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