Some people say that the government should spend more money taking care of elderly people while others think that government spending should be spent more on the education of young people. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
People have different
view
about what purposes that Suggestion
views
authorities’
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authority’s
budget
ought to spend on. In my opinion, both senior citizens and academic education of youngsters should be invested in.
On the one hand, there are multiple reasons why government
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the government budget
budget
should be used for the old
people. Owing to the fact that they all have been retired so that they are incapable of working intensively. Suggestion
older
This
situation leads to the shortage of money to which helps them to meet their fundamental requirements. For instance
, elderly people who was employed
without any insurance for financial aid after their retirement will not be able to afford food and drink to survive. So in fact, the help Suggestion
were employed
from
authorities is immensely vital for their daily lives.
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of
On the other hand
, students is
the future of a nation so it is incredibly pivotal to invest in them. Suggestion
are
Firstly
, without academic education it is impossible for next generation
to contribute to boost the national development, which will be the reason of manifold extremely awful results. Suggestion
the next generation
For instance
, there will be no invention or initiative in the future due to the lack of scientists, researchers… with wide range
of knowledge. The action of using Suggestion
a wide range
budget
for investing in school systems is the most effective method to avoid the situation that one Suggestion
a budget
the budget
country
economy will get worse rapidly.
In conclusion, it seems to me that Suggestion
country's
government’s
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a government’s budget
the government’s budget
budget
used to spend on both taking care of senior people and educating students is a key importance to the developing process of one nation.Submitted by Andy on
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