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Computers are being used more and more in education. Some people say that this is a positive trend, while others argue that it is leading to negative consequences. Discuss both sides of this argument and then give your opinion.?

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In today's
world
computer
 plays a significant role in
education
. While some people are of the opinion that it has many advantages, others believe that it will eventually end up with negative effects. I personally believe that
this
 development is must, to move forward to improve our knowledge and future.
To begin
 with, as the
world
 is changing and developing day by day,
computer
 technology is
also
 at its peak.
Therefore it
Accept comma addition
Therefore, it
 plays a major role in
education system
Suggestion
the education system
 and people are learning and
develping
relating to societies in which capital needed to industrialize is in short supply
developing
 their knowledge and skills through online. Unlike earlier decades, books are the only way to learn,
computer
 became a good platform which provides a plethora of option to learn
anything
an unspecified thing, agency, amount, etc.
something
 around the
world
.
For instance
, even in
this
 covid-19 pandemic situation children and students are able to continue their studies at home.
This
 is
unimagineable
totally unlikely
unimaginable
 without the
presence of
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presence of a computer
computer
.
However
, despite
this
, it has some drawbacks which
affects
Suggestion
affect
youngsters
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youngsters'
youngster's
education
 and life. Since, many students are easily getting deviated towards social media and wasting their golden times on it and eventually spoiling their life. And
slso
in addition
also
, a survey says that many young students like to own a smartphone as it became a trend and it leads to learn unnecessary adult things, which is destroying
thier
of them or themselves
their
education
 and future.
Moreover
, using gadgets to a maximum time will
affects
Suggestion
affect
 the health and
eye sight
normal use of the faculty of vision
eyesight
.
For instance
, my friend's daughter who is 5years old, always use
computer
Suggestion
computers
the computer
a computer
 to learn
ryhmes
correspondence in the sounds of two or more lines (especially final sounds)
rhymes
 and stories, eventually got affected and lost her good eye sight at
this
 early age. In conclusion,
although
 learning through
computer
 has many drawbacks, my opinion is every invention around the
world
 has its own advantage and disadvantage.
Hence
 we have to
conscious
Suggestion
consciously
consciousness
 about the inventions in using it only for the benefits and guide our
next
 generation
accordingly
.
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