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Nowadays children mostly spend time playing computer games rather than sports. What is the reason for this? it is a negative or positive development.

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Sports are imperative for everyone. With the advancement of technology, there are a lot of games on the computers and nowadays most of the kids indulge themselves in that, in spite of participating in the sports activities.
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 development is negative owing to a myriad of reasons which I will discuss in subsequent paragraphs. To commence with, the main cause of children preparing computer games over outdoor activities is the availability of electronic gadgets with them. As nowadays, both the parents are career oriented and due their higher salaries and lack of time to spend with their infants, they hand over them computers and mobile phones in very early stages of their life.
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, juveniles get addicted to them, and lack of physical activities is witnessed among them.
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 responsible for less participation of students in sports, as they prefer to play games online.
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 trend has many detrimental effects on the health of the youth generation.
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, they become couch potatoes.
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, due to less face to face interactions with their friends, they feel isolated, and
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 chances of a depression are high among them. After pondering over the topic, I can conclude that computer games are not beneficial to children because of its deleterious effects on their health. If parents indulge their offsprings to physical activities,
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