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Some people believe that reading stories from a book is better than watching tv or playing computer games for children. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

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Books are the helpful tool
of
Suggestion
for
 developing the reading habits among the children.It is said by some individuals that children should read
story
 books
instead
 of playing games on the computer. In my perspective, I personally believe that
story
 books enhance the creativity of children
,
Accept space
,
and they should avoid playing games on the computers and my viewpoints on
this
 issue will be elaborated in the aforementioned paragraphs.
To begin
 with, one major merit of reading the
story
 books for the children is that it
increase
Suggestion
increases
 the imagination power of the children because when they read any kind of
story
then
 they
visulize
imagine; conceive of; see in one's mind
visualize
visualise
visualized
 the characters of the
story
 which makes their inventiveness better.
For instance
, a survey was conducted in the India in the year of 2016 and its result was that an organization named ' Green world ' emphasised the distribution of
story
 books in schools and later on it had concluded in a survey that children who read
story
 books became better in reading as compared to those who did not read
story
 books.
On the other hand
, there are some drawbacks of playing video games because it has
adverse effect
Suggestion
an adverse effect
 on the eyesight of the children. Another demerit of playing video games on the computer is that it is giving the birth to the problem of obesity because children spend many hours in front of
computer
Suggestion
a computer
the computer
computers
 in order to play video games. To recapitulate, It can be said that reading
story
 books develop the good habits among children because it enhance the knowledge of the children and through
stories
Suggestion
the stories
 they learn new things.
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