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Wealth does not necessarily guaranty happiness. To what extent do you agree with this statement?

#wealth #guaranty #happiness
Money plays an indispensable role in everyone's
life
;
however
, it is often said that money
can not
can not
cannot
 buy happiness. A wealthy
peson
a human being
person
poison
passion
 is not necessarily
jublient
joyful and proud especially because of triumph or success
jubilant
 in his
life
. I agree to the aforementioned statement and will discuss my views in the
subsquent
following in time or order
subsequent
 fragments. To commence with, satisfaction is the key factor to lead a hassle-free
life
. It is commonly observed that if a person is happy with provided amenities,
then
 money loose its importance in that case. To elaborate, there are many wealthy
people which
Accept comma addition
people, which
 are not happy in their
life
, albeit provided with all the
luxurious
Suggestion
luxury
 items. To illustrate Sushasnt Singh Rajput, a
talanted
endowed with talent or talents
talented
 and rich
bollywood
the film industry of India
Bollywood
 actor
,
Accept space
,
recently hangs himself to death in his apartment which clearly shows that a wealthy person is not
guranteed
give surety or assume responsibility
guaranteed
granted
happy
Suggestion
happiness
.
On the other hand
,
plethora
Suggestion
the plethora
 of masses reckoned that only rich people can lead a happy
life
 owing to the
ardous
characterized by effort to the point of exhaustion; especially physical effort
arduous
 situations, one faced in his
life
. These types of people have less
contentation
a point asserted as part of an argument
contention
 in
life
, and always try to become rich as luxurious lifestyle allure them.
Furthermore
, folks spend their whole
life
 running behind to become rich and loose their kith and kins. What is more, people do not even pay attention to their health, and suffer many diseases. After pondering over the topic, I can conclude that
although
 money is imperative in
life
, satisfactory level plays a key role to live a joyful
life
. If a person is internally happy
then
 only one can give importance to other things.
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