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Having a good university degree guarantees people a good job. To what extent do you agree?

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I completely agree with the statement because companies who hire people from a reputable university have the confidence that students have enough knowledge and skills to help achieve organizational growth and success, they believe that students are responsible to handle complex tasks. Students who graduate from a good university are attractive to many companies. Human resource personnel believe that students can bring out the best in the working environment.
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, they contribute mainly to the success of the organization.
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 a few students do not manifest good academic records, most of them excel in their chosen field. Famous universities are strict on their school policies, and only a worthy college student can pass and graduate.
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, in my country in the Philippines, companies prioritized hiring graduate students from a renowned university by looking at their resumes because they are the best candidate to reach the company’s goals. Many students who come from well-known schools undergo extensive training and challenging examinations. With
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, they have the necessary skills that companies usually find for in an employee who will work in their organization.
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 why students who belong to a famous school are hired
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 than any other applicants because management believes of their capacity to handle job assignments with less supervision.
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, a student from Harvard University is alluring to top companies to work in their industry because they trust the students' competence and capabilities. In conclusion, I strongly believe that students who come from a reputable school can land a good job because of the reputation it brings to the companies when applying for work.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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