In Britain, when someone gets old they often go to live in a home with other old people where there are nurses to look after them. Sometimes the government has to pay for this care. Who do you think should pay for this care, the government or the family?

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In the UK, most of the elderly people are living in old-age homes where they all are taken care by nurses. While the cost of looking after of
aged
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people is given by the authorities, in my opinion, I think that the family should pay money for taking care of their old parents. There are multifarious reasons why family should take
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of paying to the old-age homes.
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, the government has several critical areas that have to be funded
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as healthcare, services, and infrastructure. If the government pays the cost of nursing homes,
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it would create a huge strain on them.
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, the authorities would not be able to improve these sectors.
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, If the family members take
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of paying the nursing homes, they would have a chance to meet their parents.
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is necessary for their and the family members as well. Owing to visit old-age homes, young people spend a quality of time with their aged parents.
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, they would respect
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older
people and the relationship between them may get stronger. Another point to consider is that meeting family members
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a paramount desire of old people. It is crucial for the youth to meet their old parents in order to see smiles on their faces;
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, paying the nursing homes would become
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the responsibility
of the family members.
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, parents nurtured and completed all desire of their children when they were young. No one can deny their sacrifices for the family.
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, it is imperative for the family members look after them.
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, there is a rule in Japan, family members have to pay for the expenses of their old parents, and they have to visit the old-age homes once in a month. In conclusion,
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the governments fund the old-age homes for taking care of old people, the family members are the key persons to take
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responsibility
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on their own.
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, I believe that sacrifices of parents should not be overlooked they become old.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Aging population
  • Elderly care
  • Nursing homes
  • Social welfare
  • Intergenerational responsibility
  • Caregiving
  • Financial burden
  • Quality of life
  • Pension funds
  • Healthcare policy
  • Taxation
  • Subsidies
  • Private insurance
  • Long-term care
  • Sustainability
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