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Financial education should be a mandatory component of the school program. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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Some people think that students
should be learn
Suggestion
should learn
 financial subject in the
school
 mandatory. In
this
 essay, I will discuss
this
 notion and give the reason why it is
benefit
Suggestion
beneficial
 to force
student
Suggestion
students
the student
a student
 to learn with it. Finance is
a
Suggestion
an
 important subject in our whole life. It is because some people have a knowledge to manage their properties, so they have an ability to make their life better.
For example
, if a person have less logical sense of allocate their
money
,
as a result
, they may
be do
Accept comma addition
be, do
 not have enough
money
 to pay for their rent or some
daliy
every day; without missing a day
daily
 necessaries because of they use all the
money
 to pay the entertainment or other things.
This
 cause they can make the income and expenditure balance.
Therefore
, financial education should compulsory a part of the
school
 program.
In addition
, if all the citizens have the knowledge to allocate their
porperties
something owned; any tangible or intangible possession that is owned by someone
properties
,
this
also
 can develop the better society. It is because if they can manage the
money
 in the right way, than many people do not have the
finance
Suggestion
financial
 problem.
Consequently
, the robberies will decrease.
Moreover
, it
also
 can create the
econormy
the system of production and distribution and consumption
economy
economic
. The best example is people utilize the
money
 in the best way. Expect they need to pay for daily necessaries and they
also
 go for shopping in their leisure time.
This
 can develop the
econormy
the system of production and distribution and consumption
economy
economic
economies
 when they have a consumption. For that
resaon
a rational motive for a belief or action
reason
reasons
, students should be mandatory to study finance in
school
. In conclusion, I strongly believe that
financail
involving financial matters
financial
 education should be
compulsory aspect
Suggestion
a compulsory aspect
 of the
school
 program, because it can develop a better society and student can study the right financial knowledge.
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