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Many countries consider eighteen-year-olds to be adults, while other countries don’t. What do you think about it? Give your opinion and some relevant examples based on your own experience.

#countries #eighteen-year-olds #adults #don’t
Dear Reddivari, Murali I am writing
this
 with regards to the
meeting which
Accept comma addition
meeting, which
 was conducted at 5:00 PM
last
friday
the sixth day of the week; the fifth working day
Friday
. I want to apologize for missing it. I know it was a very crucial call with our clients. I should have informed you ahead, but it was a
last
 minute plan and I had to leave early on that day. As it was memorial day weekend, my
inlaws
a relative by marriage
in-laws
 made a surprise visit. My wife called me and informed that I should join them for early dinner. I know the meeting will be long and I was unable to avoid the get together with family,
hence
 I left the office early at 4:00 PM. I appreciate that team covered me with the client. I want to compensate for
this
. For the
next
 weekend deployment, I want to be the lead support analyst for
saturday
the seventh and last day of the week; observed as the Sabbath by Jews and some Christians
Saturday
 and
sunday
first day of the week; observed as a day of rest and worship by most Christians
Sunday
 so that the rest of the team can enjoy the holiday. Yours sincerely, Kiran Nallapareddy.
Submitted by kirannallapareddy on

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