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Some people are of the opinion that there should be a car-free day once every month, on which no private vehicle are allowed on the road. discuss the advantages and possible disadvantages.

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Many Governments and Organization believe that, must be a a
day
 without personal vehicle allowed on the roads. A
car
 free
day
 should be even one
day
 per month.
However there
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However, there
 are some people disagree for
this
 project. In
this
 essay we are going to share the advantages and disadvantage from
this
 point.
Firstly
, admittedly we must have a
car
 free
day
 once every month, because
this
 will hold and support our environment to rest, as we know vehicle one of the pollution source, especially on
this
day
, the remarkable increase in the number of cars in recent years An obvious negative impact on the environment,
such
 as global warming, and global climate change,
also
 the traffic jam, which is becoming huge, especially
in
Suggestion
during
 rush hours.
On the Other hand
, the disadvantage of the
car
-free
day
 will affect the public transportation with all of
this
 many numbers own
car
 user ,
In particular
 the public busses and subways specially on the rush hours, Another problem which is delay for work, for sure as we know all of us
car
 is faster and more comfort than the public transportation,
also
 will be abet problem for some people those leaving far than the public transportation stations
such
 like subways stations, the only option for them will be a taxies even though will be over budget. In conclusion,
car
 is very important for our daily needs, but
also
 we have to take care of our world to reduce the pollution, In my opinion, we can make a
car
-free
day
 one per a month on the weekend days
,
Accept space
,
This
 should be coming through our government
For example
, Philippine did
this
 project and it was so helpful to reduce the pollution and traffic jam.
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