Shopping is the favorite pastime for most of the young people. Why do you think is that? Do you think they should be encouraged to do some other useful activities?

Shopping has become a trend these days. Young people have been attracted more than the

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holders

and it is their

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favourite

hobby. While

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has been argued that

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practice

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practise

should be restricted to some extent and the young generation needs to be motivated towards other things. I completely agree with the statement that how

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habit is not fruitful for them and the methods to address it which is discussed below.

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with, the world has been globalised and people are moving from one part of the world to another in the search of

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better life where they get a fat paycheck that enhances their disposable income.

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way, the earners have

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more resources to purchase the

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unnecessary

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things.

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, it has been noticed that in

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present scenario, a young person is earning minimum $2000 per month which is quite enough to have a huge buy after meeting the necessities whereas, the earnings of the older people were just to

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fulfil

their basic needs.

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, with the invention of

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mobile phones and social media,

youngesters

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youngsters

are now more fashion

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conscious

following their peers and celebrities. Everyone prefers to have

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branded products nowadays so, the young generation of the today concentrate more on shoppings.

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, the manufacturers use the trick to get customers attracted towards their goods where they highly finance in marketing particularly advertisements that help them in earning higher profits.

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, focusing just on buying things according to new fashions or trends does not lead to any productivity for the individuals as well as for the nationality as a whole. There are

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number of activities to keep a person busy in the daily routine and

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is, participating in the physical activities that help a person to maintain his/her health and enhance the environment of discipline. Sports

also

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introduce the team spirit among

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generation.

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, the early age is the age to make the career so, it can be suggested that the youth must focus on their upcoming years of life rather than wasting time on leisure.

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, purchasing goods without any need does not benefit

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anyone whereas giving

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time to the society can result in the betterment in others lives. In conclusion,

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habit is not easy to change easily but still

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given where the people should be encouraged to

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utilize

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their time wisely on some productive work.