in some cities and towns all over world, the high volume of traffic is problem. what are the causes of this and what actions can be taken to solve this problem?

Traffic
congestion on roads is the biggest
issue
of concern and it is said by some individuals that huge movement on roads is
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a
really serious dilemma.
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There are numerous reasons behind
this
,
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but there is some solution to eradicate
this
menace and my viewpoints on
this
issue
will be elaborated in the aforementioned paragraphs.
To begin
with, the
first
cause of
traffic
congestion on roads is that number of cars has been increased on the roads as compared to ancient time, and
this
has given birth to
this
issue
.
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For Instance, a survey was conducted in the year of 2018 by Karl Mark and it had concluded that all the developed and developing nations have been facing
this
problem because of the rise of cars among people, and
this
has created hassle on the roads.
However
, there are some ways to remove
this
.
Firstly
,
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the
Government can introduce the car-pooling in which people should not be allowed to use more than two cars and those families who use more than two cars should be heavily penalized.
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Another way is that in some of the nations roads are narrow so roads should be widened in order to control the
traffic
.
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To illustrate, a survey was conducted in India in the year of 2017 in which it was clear that the main reason of more
traffic
on roads is that in some of the small cities of India roads are not maintained,
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therefore
this
has given birth to
traffic
congestion. To recapitulate,
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I would like to write that
this
problem can be tackled with the joint efforts of government and individuals and it should be the sole responsibility of an individual to participate in order to solve
this
issue
.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • traffic congestion
  • urbanization
  • car ownership
  • public transportation
  • carpooling
  • cycling infrastructure
  • congestion pricing
  • population growth
  • commute
  • sustainable transport
  • traffic management
  • ride-sharing
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