In some countries an increasing number of people are suffering from health problems as a result of eating too much fast food. It is therefore necessary for governments to impose a higher tax on this kind of food.

Nowadays, the number of people suffering from

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problems related to the overconsumption fast

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is constantly increasing,

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why many people argue that the government should impose a higher tax on

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kind of

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. Personally

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opinion for the following reasons;

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, the quality of

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we eat has a direct impact on our well-being, our body cannot function well if we don't give it the good quality of nutrients it needs. As we know junk

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is very low quality and rich in fat and sugar which are harmful to our wellbeing,

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, people suffer from high blood pressure, cardiovascular diseases, obesity and diabetes,

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state doesn't take

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decision to limit

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type of commerce in few years we will get a sick society.

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, the pace of increase in diseases related to poor diet cost the authority a lot,

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the investment in infrastructures like hospitals and other equipment’s, and medicines need an important budget, we know that sickness like cancer and diabetes need special attention. In many countries the government take in charge of minimum 70 % of the total fees, at Least

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tax could contribute for

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purposes,

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it can help with financing awareness strength campaign to make people more aware about their healthcare.

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, the consumption of fast foods makes people sick which affects the economy as a whole.

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, when an employee is ill, he probably can’t focus 100% on his work because he needs time to heal. With

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high rate of absences, he is no longer efficient, so his productivity is low.

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, a company with a certain number of unhealthy employees would be impacted

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in its turnover and

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in its financial situation because of the high burden of

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insurances supported. To conclude, I think that according to its dangers on

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, junk

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should be taxed at the same rate as alcohol and tobacco to dissuade the investment in

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product, limit access and push people to cook healthy dishes at home witch which would have

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