Every country has poor people and every country has different ways of dealing with the poor. What are some of the reasons for world poverty? How can the poor be helped? Give reasons for your answers and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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In the contemporary world, one of the major
issue
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which we have been facing for several years across the nations
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poverty
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. In
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essay, I will discuss on comprehensively. We can divide the countries based on their stages
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as Developed
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,
Under developed
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Underdeveloped
country
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and Low development
country
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the richest countries in the world
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as The United States Of
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America
, Germany, France, Spain and The United Arab Emirates. Those nations have immense resources of employment and business
opportunites
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opportunities
without
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corruption
of government. They are invited to all the nationalities which connect to their growth.
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Secondly, the salary structure depends on
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nationality and education.
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, Any person
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migrates
from European and western countries along with graduation, He will intend at
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among other nationalities. Unfortunately, The poor people do not
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notify
even if he or she holds a master degree.
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,
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there
is a chance of
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in those nations at the same time due to
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unemployment and low salary employees. At the same time, The cabinet of ministry
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allotted fund and implement the new conditions with
overcome
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overcoming
from
poverty
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.
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, New employment opportunities, Charity donations, free education and
accomodation
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accommodation
accommodating
. In
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deal with under and low developed countries have been facing these issues for a long time and it still
get
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gets
to sort out.
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, India and
africa
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Africa
African
countries are massive people suffers
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from
poverty
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which they could not afford to lead a normal life which
involve
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as food, Home and cloth. To overcome from
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this
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these
circumstances, The higher officials must be taken action in certain areas, Especially They offer vital aspects of food and cloth. One of the
another
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other
drawback is that corruption, It plays an essential role in
ubiquitious
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ubiquitous
place. It depromotes
the
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country
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growth as well. In conclusion,
The
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poverty
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will be slashing with
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support of people and directorate. It is responsible
of
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for
every person in the nations.
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