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Some people say that spending time to develop a successful career is the most important thing. Others say that spending time with friends and family is more important. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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In the modern world, a few people opined that allocate
time
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 to make a tremendous job
life
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 is
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an essential
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anessential option, whereas others believe that invest
time
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 with relatives, buddies, and family is a very crucial thing of people's
life
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. In
this
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 essay, I will state my view for both ways which are worth it. On the one hand, people use more
time
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 to flourish a fortunate
career
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 which makes
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well-known
person
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 in their circumstances.
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, people would receive
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unexpected salary, and maintain
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a
luxurious home, and notable
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 in their environment.
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, Google CEO has been promoted an outstanding
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 in the world. because he did hard
work
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, and smart
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, well planned to evolve
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a
career that would become a strong
person
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 around the universe. people put more efforts to establish
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a
career and sacrifice their beautiful times with friends and family.
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, each
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 would have become a lucrative
career
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.
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, people would think that contribute
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 with companions
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and family members that would grow lucky in their total
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. if people do not spend with
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acquaintance, they will be spoiled their relationships and
work
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 pressure may increase.
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, people would be happier and health
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 should be good since they are donating their valuable times.
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, according to
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survey, people who are spending more
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 with cousin and partner, their
life
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 is wonderful and health do not get affected.
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, People would spend more
time
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 with their close people. In conclusion, people must concentrate on their goals to achieve
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a
happy
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 as well as maintain strong relationships with family friends and relatives. Every
person
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 ought to follow
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work-life
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a
work
life
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 balance between
work
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 and family that would reduce stress, tensions, and health issues.
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