Some people think that to learn about other countries, they need to travel. Some say that it is not necessary to travel; we can have information through TV and internet. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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If you want to know more about a
country
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, some may think you should go there; some may think you can learn more through
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and
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the
internet. I think going to the
country
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in
person
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learn much more than just sitting in a room and watch the
TV
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or
internet
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. Here we will give you some examples. It will be a memorable experience if you go to a
country
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, to explore the attractive sites, learn about the history, and get to know the
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custom
and traditions there.
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you can learn
these information
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this information
from the
internet
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and other media, going there in
person
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leave you a memorable experience about that
country
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.
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, special cuisine from that
country
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cannot be tasted on the
internet
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but can be enjoyed in a real restaurant.
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, memories can be made by going to a place with your friends and family members. It is totally different from watching
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with your friend. You can take videos, pictures
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on
the tour, you can buy
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souvenir
souvenirs
there. The tour would be a good memory for the people goes to that
country
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.
Internet
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and
TV
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do give us a lot of information about other countries. The advantage of using
this
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method is we can see anywhere we are interested
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in
. We can just relax on the sofa, turn on the
TV
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or computer, search the place you want to see. As there are abundant videos or pictures
about
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of
different countries, it is easily accessible to us. We can watch educational programs like National Geographic,
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Lonely
Planet, or even some entertaining
Vblogs
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V blogs
which are made by
internet
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users. We can save the money of buying tickets and expenses for travelling. We can even repeatedly looking at the places and explore different aspects of that county. History, language, landscape, attractive sites etc can be seen on the
TV
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and
internet
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.
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, as described previously, we cannot have
a
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direct
interaction
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with the people there and cannot taste the food there.
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way
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of knowing the
country
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is a
one
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one-way
way
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interaction
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rather than a
two
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two-way
way
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interaction
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. To conclude, I think going to a place in
person
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will give us a better understanding of a
country
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. We can still get information on
TV
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programs and the
internet
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, but
this
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is a single
interaction
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. Travelling in
person
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allows us to have a
two
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two-way
way
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interaction
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and deeper understanding in one
country
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.
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