Some people think that to learn about other countries, they need to travel. Some say that it is not necessary to travel; we can have information through TV and internet. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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If you want to know more about a

country

, some may think you should go there; some may think you can learn more through

and

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the

internet. I think going to the

country

person

learn much more than just sitting in a room and watch the

internet

. Here we will give you some examples. It will be a memorable experience if you go to a

country

, to explore the attractive sites, learn about the history, and get to know the

costom

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custom

and traditions there.

Although

you can learn

these information

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this information

from the

internet

and other media, going there in

person

leave you a memorable experience about that

country

For instance

, special cuisine from that

country

cannot be tasted on the

internet

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apply

but can be enjoyed in a real restaurant.

Moreover

, memories can be made by going to a place with your friends and family members. It is totally different from watching

with your friend. You can take videos, pictures

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the tour, you can buy

souvenior

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souvenir

souvenirs

there. The tour would be a good memory for the people goes to that

country

Internet

and

do give us a lot of information about other countries. The advantage of using

this

method is we can see anywhere we are interested

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. We can just relax on the sofa, turn on the

or computer, search the place you want to see. As there are abundant videos or pictures

about

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different countries, it is easily accessible to us. We can watch educational programs like National Geographic,

Lonley

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Lonely

Planet, or even some entertaining

Vblogs

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V blogs

which are made by

internet

users. We can save the money of buying tickets and expenses for travelling. We can even repeatedly looking at the places and explore different aspects of that county. History, language, landscape, attractive sites etc can be seen on the

and

internet

Nevertheless

, as described previously, we cannot have

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apply

direct

interaction

with the people there and cannot taste the food there.

This

way

of knowing the

country

is a

one

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one-way

way

interaction

rather than a

two

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two-way

way

interaction

. To conclude, I think going to a place in

person

will give us a better understanding of a

country

. We can still get information on

programs and the

internet

, but

this

is a single

interaction

. Travelling in

person

allows us to have a

two

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two-way

way

interaction

and deeper understanding in one

country

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6Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
14Grammar mistakes
 

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400 words

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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.5

Complete response

6.5

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

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