Some people think that books are loosing importance as a source of information and entertainment. To what extent do you agree?

Unemployment is a tackling issue of modern society. Numerous countries implement various ways in order to cope with
problem. Some people suggest providing mobile devices to every jobless person as one of the ways to lower the unemployment rate.
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essay will argue that providing cells will not only be useless but it will
exacerbate the problem. To start off, one of the benefits of
attitude is free
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access to job vacancies. People may find loads of employment opportunities on websites
as '' or 'jonmonster' and respond to a job advertisement immediately.
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the internet provides with necessary information and tips to prepare for the interview.
For example
, 'youtube' channels contain videos of the most common questions and how to prepare for them.
, in my way of thinking, giving away cell phones is a very expensive program which results in a waste of taxpayers' money.
For instance
, the price of one of the cheapest smartphone is around 200$ but we need thousands of them. These part of the budget could be spent to build a new school or a hospital. For
method is not implemented in any country. Another thing is that it may increase the unemployment rate. In order to get a new cell more and more
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working people will become jobless.
, they may work without official unemployment.
, it may affect the quantity of paid taxes and the state budget in general. To sum up, I think that giving mobile phones is not the best option for coping with
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uneployment rate.
measure provides with free access to career opportunities, to my way of thinking,
amount of money could be spent for more vital purposes
as education or medicine.
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