The use of social media is replacing face-to-face interaction among many people in society. Do you think the advantages outweigh the advantages?

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interaction among many people in society. The writer thinks that
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dvantages outweigh the disadvantages. Some explanations will be in the
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ot of disadvantages of replacing the
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contact of people by the
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of social media because by that true sincerity cannot be seen
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social media people cannot see in
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ransaction with. They
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they can be a victim of
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the sincerity of that
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there are more advantages like using social media to contact love ones in other countries. It can be one way to show your love and care to your family members without
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contact. Another reason can be using social media in selecting some flights tickets or reservations in hotels or purchasing clothes and foods in
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ifferent app. The study shows that there are
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ot of company that are making apps in order to satisfy
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some needs of the consumers. People tend to patronize
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points or other benefits that consumers
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from using social media
instead
of having
face
the
face
interactions, like going to the malls for buying food and in reserving plane tickets. To conclude there are some disadvantages in using social media like being scammed but for the writer, the advantages outweigh the disadvantages, the society must be responsible in using social media in order to protect those consumers and to fully patronize using social media as
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eplacement for
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