The use of social media is replacing face-to-face interaction among many people in society. Do you think the advantages outweigh the advantages?

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of social media in our society is now upgrading, one common

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interaction among many people in society. The writer thinks that

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dvantages outweigh the disadvantages. Some explanations will be in the

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contact of people by the

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social media people cannot see in

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ransaction with. They

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social media as communication and because of that

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there are more advantages like using social media to contact love ones in other countries. It can be one way to show your love and care to your family members without

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contact. Another reason can be using social media in selecting some flights tickets or reservations in hotels or purchasing clothes and foods in

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ifferent app. The study shows that there are

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some needs of the consumers. People tend to patronize

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points or other benefits that consumers

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from using social media

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interactions, like going to the malls for buying food and in reserving plane tickets. To conclude there are some disadvantages in using social media like being scammed but for the writer, the advantages outweigh the disadvantages, the society must be responsible in using social media in order to protect those consumers and to fully patronize using social media as

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eplacement for

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