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You have bought some clothing online and are not satisfied with your purchase. Write a letter to the company that you bought the clothing from. In your email -Give detail of the purchase -Desribe the problem -Explain why you need a replacement urgently.

#purchase #company #email #-give #detail #-desribe #-explain #replacement
Dear Sir, I am Janvi Bhuva, a regular customer of Amazon online shopping. I am writing
this
 letter to complain about the
clothes
 I ordered on September 22nd. Yesterday, I received the parcel of
clothes
 I ordered—two T-shirts and three pairs of jeans in different
color
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colors
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. When I opened the parcel, I saw that all the
clothes
 were there. I tried on all the
clothes
. The
clothes
 and fabric were amazing, but the size of one T-shirt was too small.
Hence
, I want to wear that T-shirt on sports day, which my college is organizing on September 30th. I promptly reached out to customer service, but unfortunately, I was unable to secure a satisfactory resolution to my issue.
Furthermore
, I require an immediate replacement as I intend to wear the item to an upcoming sporting event. I kindly request that your company urgently process a replacement. In anticipation, await for positive response. Yours faithfully, Janvi Bhuva
Submitted by janvi.bhuva2000 on

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coherence cohesion
Ensure that the opening of the letter provides a brief overview of the issue before delving into specific details, to provide better context.
task achievement
Mentioning the order number or any reference number can provide more specificity and clarity in your letter.
suitable writing tone
Your letter is polite and maintains a respectful tone, which is suitable for this type of correspondence.
logical structure
The structure of your letter is clear, with a logical flow of information from the description of the purchase to the explanation of the problem and your urgent need for a replacement.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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