People nowadays get married and give birth to younger ones in their thirties rather than in mid-twenties. Is ot a positive or negative development? give specific reasons for your answer.

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present scenario, mostly adult tend to knot in a series relationship and have children at the

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of thirty. While in past usually people get married in mid-twenties. I would rather say that it has both dark and bright side because

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in my opinion, It becomes quintessential for people to be successful fast before having a family. In

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elevant example before reaching a conclusion.

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, Nowadays individuals are a way more materialistic

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ever before. They tend to value material things more than feelings and emotions. because they are living in a competitive world, Where everyone wants to live an ideal life. which is not possible without a well-paid job or a successful business.

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, To achieve a certain position in society they put all their efforts and intentions on their career only.

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is one of the common reason behind late marriages. In my viewpoint, It is a realistic approach because getting married at an early

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will put a lot of responsibilities on our shoulders as well as it will distract our attention from our career

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, It has some bad effects

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which include reproductive problems at a later

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arge number of problems in getting pregnant. Their body cannot bear these hardships and they face a lot of difficulties like high blood pressure, Abnormalities in children, e.t.c

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, sometimes people went through anxiety, depression and loneliness. Because lacking good companion in their life makes them feel alone. which put a detrimental effect on their mental and physical health. To conclude,

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it has a lot of disadvantages

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it is more important to be a success

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because we could not bear the burden of a family. which will lead to more tension than peace.