Many people think that too much attention and resources are given to the protection of wild animals and birds. Do you agree or disagree?

A lot of

people

believe that governments and other organizations invested too many resources in protecting wild lives and birds.

However

, from my perspective, animal

protection

merits attention and would never be too much because that has enormous benefits on human

kinds

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beings

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. First of all, preserving wild

animals

is beneficial to biological diversity.

As a result

, the ecosystem would remain in a stable condition, which helps alleviate global warming

along with

reducing extreme

weathers

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.

Thus

,

people

could enjoy clean air and beautiful nature scenes from the

protection

.

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, a group

of

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Sydney University

had

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compared two areas with the same latitude, which are Sydney and an underdeveloped coastal area in Africa. They found that the weather temperature in Sydney fluctuated more dramatically than

the

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African area

where

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boasts larger wild

animals'

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animals

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conservations.

Secondly

, in the contemporary world, many fields create products and inventions by observing

animals

.

According to

a statistic provided by Harvard University, 60% of inventions per year in

American

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America

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inspired by

animals

.

For example

, the reason why the Hubble Telescope can turn around in

the

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outer space without consuming energy

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attributes

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to a phenomenon found in cats. The famous Cat Falling Phenomenon

also

applied to a lot of areas and

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contributed to a large proportion of the economic increase in the 20th century.

Thus

, protecting wild

animals

are

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profitable. To summarize, though some

people

argue that wildlife receives excessive

protection

, I disagree with them.

Due to

profits

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the profits

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that

people

can gain from preserving wild

animals

including high-quality environment and inventions, I,

therefore

, believe that

animals

deserve a large number of

protection

resources from human beings.