Some people say that vertical city is best where people can live, while others say that horizontal cities are better. Discuss both the views and give your opinion.

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The population

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of people are getting higher every decade. The number of people who migrate from

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the

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ountryside to

city

are

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developing.

However

, a

city

has its own capacity to bear individuals.

Therefore

, there are 2 different ideas to build a

city

correspond to the developing number of human populations, which are vertical

city

and horizontal

city

. It has been argued that

one

idea

are

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better than

other

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another idea

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idea

.

However

, I think it is depend

of

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their needs.

First

of all, I would like to say that

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the

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ertical

city

is

very

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every

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temptation

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tempting

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for me.

This

idea

is

such

a big innovation for urban

live

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life

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.

Vertical

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The vertical

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city

is offered a notion that

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a

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unch of people can live together in the same roof.

Also

, the building repairment or maintenance is

controled

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controlled

by the building management.

This

mean

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that we can leave that household improvement to the officials. So, we can use our time to do anything else.

This

is very beneficial for people who live in a small family and busy with their works.

Therefore

, they can focus on their businesses rather than take care of building problems. Another creative

idea

in

this

field is that it uses the land that

are

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not occupied with buildings to be used as parks, which can be a better place for people to relax. On the other side,

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a

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orizontal

city

is much more traditional rather than

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the

a

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ertical

city

.

Although

it is

quite

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quite an

a quite

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old

idea

, there are

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a

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ot of

peple

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people

still agree with

this

choice.

This

term can be described as

one

family in a roof.

This

is

neccessary

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necessary

for big

familiy

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family

that consists of over than 4 people. If

this

kind of family

live

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in

v

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a

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ertical

city

, I am

affraid

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afraid

that

the

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space

it

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is not enough.

Therefore

, they need

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a

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arger place to live together in

one

roof.

This

horizontal

city

can be found in the developing countries, which commonly have more than 5 people in a family, and the shortage of equipments

are

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also

one

of

b

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the

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ig problems.

Therefore

, they can not provide a vertical

city

in the near future. In a nutshell, I would like to say that I like the

idea

of

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a

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ertical

city

rather than

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a

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orizontal

city

. The reasons are because I like the term of saving some spaces

for

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open

one

, and

also

, I do not have a plan to live with

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a

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ig family.

Thus

,

this

idea

of

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the

a

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ertical

city

is really into me.