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The advantage of the spread of English as a global language will continue to outweigh its disadvantages. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

#advantage #spread #english #language
Undoubtedly,
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 is the new medium of communication between any two countries present in
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 universe. The impact of
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 ever-growing trend is dense and can have both advantages and disadvantages of its own. To commence with, having a hold on
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 evergreen language, one can open more options for himself. Personages and even scholars can apply for better education qualification in developed countries like the United State, United Kingdom and many more, while one could even apply for job opportunities in the headquarters of Multinational Company (MNC). To add on, nowadays
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 is a common medium of communication, even the companies that are located in the non-
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 speaking country goes for candidates who have a good command on
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 speech, as
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 brings them with more business opportunity.
Nonetheless
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nglish wording has its own negative effects. If a person wants to publish their research work in an international general, they fail to do so, as they are not well aware of the terminology. If a group of people from Germany wants to publish something related to automobiles, in an international general, they face difficulties in publishing their work, even if they are the best in the market of the automobile. Which is judging a person on language ability rather than his/her knowledge about the subject. To summaries,
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nglish language has it's own negative and positive effects on the world. It could create more options for international students and employees whereas, one's calibre could be under judged. Yes, sometimes
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 could overpower its negative aspects incomparission to its positive aspects.
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