Some people believe that unpaid community service should be a compulsory part of high school programmes(for example working for a charity, improving the neighborhood or teaching sports to younger children ) To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Some people suggest that free
community
service should be incorporated into high school
programmes and it is a great opportunity for pupils to build g
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the
community
. I partly agree with this
idea and I will explain it in this
essay.
On the one hand, doing voluntary jobs such
as teaching sports to younger children can have a positive impact on adolescents' personality development and can create a more friendly envrionment
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environment
neighbors
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neighbours
In other words
, learning how to help others without asking payback enables teenagers to become a well rounded
person. Add a hyphen
well-rounded
For example
, a recent study conducted in the US has shown the students who are willing to involve in community
service are generally more open-minded and have high social intelligence. As a result
, those qualities are the main reasons why they tend to be more successful in the
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envrionment
since they are great team players.
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environment
On the other hand
, there are drawbacks in doing too much community
works. This
is because that
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school
students usually have to spend 8 to 12 hours in school
and they might not have enough time to deal with extra work. Take Chinese high school
students as an example, they have to study about seven different subjects on average and do homeworks
after Correct your spelling
homework
school
, which can cause them approximately over 13 hours per day. In this
case, compulsory services would pose too much pressure on students since it is basically impossible to balance school
life and other physical work.
In conclusion, community
service can be beneficial to students' personal growth. However
, sometimes it would probably be stressful for them. Personally, I believe that contributing to the neighborhood
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a
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school
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