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Today, the high sales of popular consumer goods reflect the power of advertising and not the real needs of the society in which they are sold. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Nowadays, advertisement, in general, push the trades of consumer’s products and services,
altough
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, in most of the cases, they do not express the society real necessities.
This
 essay totally agrees with
this
 statement once people are connecting the buying process with
happyness
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happiness
 and
also
 they are acquiring products and services that they don’t use.
Firstly
, due to the advance of marketing research and advertisement, propaganda is now affecting how people perceive
hapiness
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happiness
. The sense of realization is becoming related to how many things someone is able to own and it is leading people to materialize joy and pleasure.
For instance
, an England magazine Era
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 released an article that
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 that
youngesters
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youngsters
, nowadays, feel more self-assured, confident and happy if they are able to have access to the
last
 smartphone launched.
Secondly
, people are addicted to
buy
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 what is shown on
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V commercial and advertised in social
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.
This
 habit is making the average consumer accumulate more than they can financially manage. A government agency which
measure
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 the spent average of housing budget has shown that 78
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 of American families spent part of their life savings buying products that actually they didn’t need. To conclude, advertising is trending people to buy things that they don’t need in order to achieve a sense of
hapiness
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happiness
 and
also
 accumulating products that they don’t really use.
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