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Band 8

You visited local beach and found out that there is a rubbish problem. In your letter: Describe the problem How it affects people on the beach Suggest what you want to do about them

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Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing concerning Palma
beach
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, where I have recently been to. The issue is that the
beach
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 is full of litter that people have left after spending a holiday on it. In fact, it is almost impossible to find a free sport without bumping on a glass of broken bottles, beer cans, wrappings, and watermelon peels, etc. It is understood that it is not only an ecology problem but
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 unsanitary conditions. As well as children may harm themselves stepping on the broken glass. I strongly suggest you tackle
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 problem as soon as possible.
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, it is recommended to send a cleaning team to the
beach
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 and remove all the trash.
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, the administration might give an announcement for those who want to volunteer and help with picking up trash. The
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 measure will be introducing a fine for dumping waste on the
beach
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 and providing a sufficient amount of garbage bins. I hope you will address my complaint at the earliest opportunity. Sincerely yours, Mariya
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The Greeting

Depending on the style and aim of the letter, you will need to adapt your greeting.

Always start an informal letter in the ways:

  • Dear + name
  • Hi / Hello + name

‘Dear...’ is more appropriate, so stick with this.

For a formal letter there are two options for the greeting:

  • Use Dear Sir or Madam if you don’t know the name of the person you are writing to.
  • Use Dear + surname if you do know their name, e.g. Dear Mr Smith or Dear Mrs Jones.

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