You have a problem with a neighbor. Write a letter to your neighbor. In your letter Describe the problem Say how long it has been a problem Explain what action you want the neighbor to take.

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Dear

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Raman, Hope you’re doing well. I am Virpal Kaur Dhaliwal. I am your

neighbor

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and living in 45 house number. I am writing to express my annoyance with you loud

music

the loud

music

that I hear from your house. Every night, I have struggled to sleep early due to

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volume of your

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. I am have been suffering

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this

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since 25th March 2020. I notice that every night you play loud

music

till midnight. It gives me hard time for my proper sleep, affects my daily routine and gives me

headache

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and

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effects

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my health. Your high volume

music

not only me,

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heard from other people they

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with

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this

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too. Not only I am concerned about

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the members of the other household are

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sharing

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concern on social media. I would like to say that to keep

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low level

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volume of your

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. So other people will feel comfortable and sleep properly. (Add one sentence more to do justice with

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bullet). I look forward to

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resolution

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. I very much appreciate

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your help. Yours sincerely, Virpal Kaur Dhaliwal

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3Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
2Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
19Grammar mistakes
 

9 paragraphs

198 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

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You have a problem with a neighbor. Write a letter to your neighbor. In your letter Describe the problem Say how long it has been a problem Explain what action you want the neighbor to take.

You are not ready for IELTS Speaking, if you

Leisure is a growing industry. Nowadays, more of modern technology is used in entertainment, which may lead people to be less creative. Do you agree or disagree? state your view with examples.

People should stop using their mobile phones when they are with other people. How much do you agree with this opinion and why? Give reasons and examples to support your answer.

These days many parents want their children to study a second language such as English. Do you think it is important for younger children to study a new language? Do you think schools should teach every student in primary school a second language?

In a number of countries, some people think it is necessary to spend large sums of money on constructing new railway lines for very fast trains between cities.Others believe the money should be spent on improving existing public transport.

Task 2 Some people believe that professionals, such asdoctors and enginers should be required to work in the ciuntry where they did their training. Others believe they should be free to work in another country if they wish. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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