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You have a problem with a neighbor. Write a letter to your neighbor. In your letter Describe the problem Say how long it has been a problem Explain what action you want the neighbor to take.

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Dear
Mr.
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 Raman, Hope you’re doing well. I am Virpal Kaur Dhaliwal. I am your
neighbor
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 and living in 45 house number. I am writing to express my annoyance with you loud
music
 the loud
music
 that I hear from your house. Every night, I have struggled to sleep early due to
high
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 volume of your
music
. I am have been suffering
with
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this
problem
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since 25th March 2020. I notice that every night you play loud
music
 till midnight. It gives me hard time for my proper sleep, affects my daily routine and gives me
headache
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 and
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effects
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 my health. Your high volume
music
 not only me,
I
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but I also
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 heard from other people they
are suffer
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with
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this
problem
 too. Not only I am concerned about
this
problem
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the members of the other household are
also
 sharing
this
 concern on social media. I would like to say that to keep
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the low
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low level
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 volume of your
music
. So other people will feel comfortable and sleep properly. (Add one sentence more to do justice with
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 bullet). I look forward to
early
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an early
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 resolution
for
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 my
problem
. I very much appreciate
you
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for
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your help. Yours sincerely, Virpal Kaur Dhaliwal
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